Self acceptance means that you are happy with who you are
I feel happy with my friends at school
I have a good circle of friends
Like Nikita, Ella, Valerie, and Casey
On Wednesdays we play Basketball
We move really fast and our pulses go up
Basketball is a team sport not a solitary sport.
I am happy when I watch the horses racing
I like the way the horses move along the track
I like to watch my favourite driver
His name is Dexter Dunn
He is rated as the best driver in New Zealand
He has driven champions like Christen Me
Christen Me won the free for all race
Dexter won the ‘The Best Driver of the Year’ for 2019
He was awarded a cash prize,
He is in America at the moment
When he comes back
He will be in deep deep trouble
He is being accused of race-fixing
Personally, I think he didn’t do it
If he did do it then why isn’t he in trouble
Other drivers who were accused with Dexter
Are still driving.
And how is that fair?
Very interesting Paige :-)
ReplyDeleteMy favourite part is:
"When he comes back
He will be in deep deep trouble"
I like the emphasis on trouble you create by repeating the word "deep" twice. Ending your poem with a question is a good idea, as it makes the reader think. Next time, I'd like to see you try balancing the verses by using the same number of lines in each stanza.
Great job on your blog thank you .
ReplyDeleteVery good on thinking on dexter.