Friday, 7 September 2018
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Kia ora Paige,
ReplyDeleteHow great that you managed to put your slideshow into your blog! You have worked really hard on this blog post - well done. I especially enjoyed the fact that you included all the steps to making fudge cake, and you made sure your slides were easy to read and had lots of eye-catching images.
Is there anything you can think of doing to make your blog posts even more exciting? Perhaps we could look at using another digital tool next time?
Mīharo - awesome work.
Miss Patrick
Morena Paige,
ReplyDeleteGreat slide show. How did you find the process of cooking the fudge? Was it easy to make? Did you enjoy doing the dishes afterward? If you made the fudge again would you change anything?
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Hello Paige, I'm Caitlyn from Rawhiti school. I really liked how you listed the instructions,method and the equipment I will need. Did you think about what other things you could have done to change the outcome. Did you like making the fudge?
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